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What! Tailsbro survived!?! The power of pokepuffs saved him! Thank Archeops for the friendship bonus that allows pokemon to survive on 1 hp.
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maybe, but knowing this bird...
thanks! I'm also really glad on how dirtlads design turned, despite how long it took to make and finalize
kalos random trainers are scarier than most of the gym leaders tbh
seems like that one extra comic all the way back in cyllage ended up saving him!
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this actually does bring to mind the fact that xy has a plot with a big death bird (with a cool design despite trying way too hard to have a y silhouette) and it is rapidly approaching because xy has shit plot pacing. interesting to see how mr archeops will factor into that as well
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So Harold can defeat Yveltal in chains? Why do I have the feeling that Yveltal is going to get a sling shot, and a bunch of pebbles, and chip damage Harold just out of his range just to mock him. It looks like Tailsbro has a time limit now. I wonder if he's going to pull out the "I have a terminal illness only Xerneas can cure card. That seems like a good manipulation tactic.
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harold can only hope tailsbro. doesn't muk it all up
Okay, I might just draw that slingshot thing just for how funny that sounds
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Friendship? Tailsbro never heard of it. Clearly Tailsbro is forever in Lakour's debt as a campfire starter.
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no, he owes hime something even more....being his heat air conditioning!
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Lakour, don't you know that Waweezer is doing you a favor by sticking to 2012 memes? If you aren't careful he's going to start drawing cursed tik-tok challenges to mess with you until you lose faith in the next generation and beg for him to go back to 2012 memes.
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Come on. Anyone would be hard pressed to name someone who has unironically used an Abomasnow before, so the potential pool of people that haven't named their Abomasnow some derivative of Mr. Barack Obama is already very very small. That aside I named my Snover Big Butt once and it died like immediately after while grinding.
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imagine a nuzlocke that has a cringey 2020 meme every other joke.
to be fair, most people I know name their abomasnows something Obama related.
also, I'm sorry you lost you big butt, it must've been traumatizing.
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By the way, Lakours Nuzlocke is pretty close to reaching it's end. I think the last time I asked and got criticism for this comic was over a year ago. I'd like to see If I have improved by then and what I do to keep up the comics good work and how to improve it.
so make sure to reply to this post with your honest constructive criticism!
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I have caught up!
As for C/C, I'm horrible at giving them out, but I can say that you have improved over your journey. I would say that your dialogue placement has greatly improved and it is much cleaner to read and follow. Also it's so fascinating to see how your art changed a bit over the progress of the story. :]
WHOA, that fakeout with Tailsbro caught me by surprise. Also, Dirtlad has evolved! Yay!
Also the plot is thickening as we're near the end! This is getting exciting.
Also the plot is thickening as we're near the end! This is getting exciting.
As for C/C, I'm horrible at giving them out, but I can say that you have improved over your journey. I would say that your dialogue placement has greatly improved and it is much cleaner to read and follow. Also it's so fascinating to see how your art changed a bit over the progress of the story. :]
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Oh boy! Shady Lakour again!
It was interesting when you hinted at Shady Lakour at the beginning, but I feel like for long stretches of the comic that plotline is completely forgotten about. Like I remember that between tailsbro joining and I think it was until after the 4th gym, that plotline got completely overshadowed by Tailsbro. In places were there could be long stretches between a plot point being brought up, you could put in some jokes to remind the audience. Like after Lakour changes his clothes someone could talk about upgrading his trainer ID, Lakour could say some absurd story like it fell down a flight of stairs and is currently at the hospital, only for the other person to accept that.
As for Lakour's team you have Belle the cute little blep frog who turned more cynical as she found out Tailsbro was involved with her friends deaths. Fantiy the timid Oddish. Tailsbro the main villain who is trying to manipulate Lakour. And Dirtlad who is being manipulated into Tailsbro's second hand mon. I also distinctly remember Box fodder the super cool thumbs up therapist, and the Amoura you caught that is having a crisis over being revived. I remember Muffin, Kenny, Alice and Finona died, but I don't remember that much about their characters. Make of that what you will. But if you want to make pokemon who don't get a lot of screen time more memorable, you could include jokes in the few scenes that they do appear. Like instead of Lucia(had to look up her name) just standing around when she got caught, you could have her doing something like going for the cup stacking world record, and then have it all tumbling down when Lakour throws his Ultra ball. Little things like that to add some extra flare.
It was interesting when you hinted at Shady Lakour at the beginning, but I feel like for long stretches of the comic that plotline is completely forgotten about. Like I remember that between tailsbro joining and I think it was until after the 4th gym, that plotline got completely overshadowed by Tailsbro. In places were there could be long stretches between a plot point being brought up, you could put in some jokes to remind the audience. Like after Lakour changes his clothes someone could talk about upgrading his trainer ID, Lakour could say some absurd story like it fell down a flight of stairs and is currently at the hospital, only for the other person to accept that.
As for Lakour's team you have Belle the cute little blep frog who turned more cynical as she found out Tailsbro was involved with her friends deaths. Fantiy the timid Oddish. Tailsbro the main villain who is trying to manipulate Lakour. And Dirtlad who is being manipulated into Tailsbro's second hand mon. I also distinctly remember Box fodder the super cool thumbs up therapist, and the Amoura you caught that is having a crisis over being revived. I remember Muffin, Kenny, Alice and Finona died, but I don't remember that much about their characters. Make of that what you will. But if you want to make pokemon who don't get a lot of screen time more memorable, you could include jokes in the few scenes that they do appear. Like instead of Lucia(had to look up her name) just standing around when she got caught, you could have her doing something like going for the cup stacking world record, and then have it all tumbling down when Lakour throws his Ultra ball. Little things like that to add some extra flare.
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Nice to see you again Sakurah!
yeah, dialogue placement was a criticism a I got often back then, good to know that's fixed!
Yeah, I really could've used the shady Lakour plotline better, oh well, at least in this part it's gonna start picking up steam!
as for the pokemon, I do agree that some pokemon get much more screentime than others and even though I've improved at making multiple interesting pokemon since my first nuzlocke, it's still somewhat of a problem, I'll try my best to fix it.
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Well, Tailsbro does kinda have a point regarding Lucario's typing. Sometimes the type setups on some Pokemon are pretty whack-a-doo.
also square head pfffffft lolol
also square head pfffffft lolol
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Tailsbro has a point. There is no good reason that those spikes should give +75 defense.
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New extra comic!
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did I do this just to draw a cool space shot? maybe...
but honestly, I knew I was gonna be too busy this week to do a full comic so I tried to make do with the time I had
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did I do this just to draw a cool space shot? maybe...
but honestly, I knew I was gonna be too busy this week to do a full comic so I tried to make do with the time I had
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Hi! Missed a couple of updates while I was out. Lucario being just Some Dog except for steel spikes is hilarious, you'd think it was fighting/psychic with the weird aura thing it has going on.
CC- Your shapes and lines are glorious and I think the characters' facial expressions, esp with the weirder Pokemon faces and designs have gotten a lot better. I think it would be nice if u played around with paneling more?
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This has been in my mind for forever.
CC- Your shapes and lines are glorious and I think the characters' facial expressions, esp with the weirder Pokemon faces and designs have gotten a lot better. I think it would be nice if u played around with paneling more?
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This has been in my mind for forever.
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Well Lakour just turned on the gym leader's playstation. Now I can't unhear the boot up noise in my head.
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don't know why tailsbro getting a fortnite dub was in your mind for so long, but I absolutely love it nonetheless!Hi! Missed a couple of updates while I was out. Lucario being just Some Dog except for steel spikes is hilarious, you'd think it was fighting/psychic with the weird aura thing it has going on.
CC- Your shapes and lines are glorious and I think the characters' facial expressions, esp with the weirder Pokemon faces and designs have gotten a lot better. I think it would be nice if u played around with paneling more?
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This has been in my mind for forever.
sorry not sorry
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sorry for the long break, putting my og series on hiatus kinda took me out on making comics for a while
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big stronk dirtlad ™
Also Lucia is precious. <3
Also Lucia is precious. <3