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Thread Description
a PMD-inspired comic in which an eevee causes hell for everyone around her

Pika

rͬͬͬaͣͣͣtͭͭͭ
Artist
Screenshotter
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
27
Caught
Jun 9, 2019
Messages
162
Location
All around you, in the radio waves
Nature
Jolly
Pronouns
i'm pro but not noun
Pokémon Type
  1. Dark
  2. Fairy
Pokédex Entry
A Pokémon known for its harsh gaze and sharp tongue. Despite its rough exterior, it is friendlier than it looks.
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Growing up is hard. Wouldn't it just be better to run away?

After a fateful run-in with a mew, eighteen-year-old Lily Stone finds herself far from home, stuck with an unfriendly incineroar, and more importantly, turned into an eevee. It seems like a dream come true -- until her family wants to know where she is.



Chapter 1 - The Hapless Haphazard!

Cover
Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
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Page 6
Page 7
Page 8
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Page 10
Page 11
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SO, this is my second comic, Haphazard!
it's loosely based on red rescue team and includes some locations from the game, but the characters and plot are all new, so there are some juicy surprises in store for you in more ways than one.
unlike The Stars Shine Bright, Haphazard! may not, and often does not, update weekly. updates for tssb take priority every week, and i'm busy so updates are typically slow-going, but it always updates on Saturdays
the previous 3 pages are linked in the slider above, so let's take a look at this week's update!

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Salt&PepperBunny

Author of Finding Your Roots and Little Lapses
Artist
Writer
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
47
Caught
Jun 15, 2019
Messages
1,975
Location
The Hilltop Warren
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
  1. Fairy
  2. Flying
Pokédex Entry
Rabbits are so human. Or perhaps, humans are so rabbit?
Ooh, Im happy to see this comic here! :D Its still early on, but I already like Lily Stone, and Im excited to see her get turned into an eevee and go on a wacky PMD adventure. We can always use more PMD in our lives!
 

Rubombee

Moth · the ace that stays up the sleeve
Artist
Writer
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
61
Caught
Jun 15, 2019
Messages
805
Location
Greenpath, Hallownest
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
they/them, shey/ther
Pokémon Type
  1. Water
  2. Bug
  3. Ghost
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't even eat baguette, are you sure they're French
Hello I shall follow this as well!! Honestly I can't wait to see whatcha got in store! <3
 

Pika

rͬͬͬaͣͣͣtͭͭͭ
Artist
Screenshotter
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
27
Caught
Jun 9, 2019
Messages
162
Location
All around you, in the radio waves
Nature
Jolly
Pronouns
i'm pro but not noun
Pokémon Type
  1. Dark
  2. Fairy
Pokédex Entry
A Pokémon known for its harsh gaze and sharp tongue. Despite its rough exterior, it is friendlier than it looks.
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #4
Ooh, Im happy to see this comic here! :D Its still early on, but I already like Lily Stone, and Im excited to see her get turned into an eevee and go on a wacky PMD adventure. We can always use more PMD in our lives!
absolutely!! i'm excited to tell an actual pmd story for once, though it won't be your average pmd comic c; (doesn't everyone say that these days? it loses impact after a while)

Hello I shall follow this as well!! Honestly I can't wait to see whatcha got in store! <3
i'm SO excited you have no idea. as i said, it'll most likely be slow going but i'm definitely staying put with it
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oh to be in the shadow of a sibling
 
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Rubombee

Moth · the ace that stays up the sleeve
Artist
Writer
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
61
Caught
Jun 15, 2019
Messages
805
Location
Greenpath, Hallownest
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
they/them, shey/ther
Pokémon Type
  1. Water
  2. Bug
  3. Ghost
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't even eat baguette, are you sure they're French
Honestly I feel very called out about that bus thing
 

Salt&PepperBunny

Author of Finding Your Roots and Little Lapses
Artist
Writer
Team Omega
Pokédex No.
47
Caught
Jun 15, 2019
Messages
1,975
Location
The Hilltop Warren
Nature
Quirky
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
  1. Fairy
  2. Flying
Pokédex Entry
Rabbits are so human. Or perhaps, humans are so rabbit?
Panels 2 and 3 is the biggest fucking mood when talking to adults. X"DDD You could white out the speech bubble and replace it with so many different things and it'd still be wildly accurate! XD
 

Pika

rͬͬͬaͣͣͣtͭͭͭ
Artist
Screenshotter
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
27
Caught
Jun 9, 2019
Messages
162
Location
All around you, in the radio waves
Nature
Jolly
Pronouns
i'm pro but not noun
Pokémon Type
  1. Dark
  2. Fairy
Pokédex Entry
A Pokémon known for its harsh gaze and sharp tongue. Despite its rough exterior, it is friendlier than it looks.
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #7
Honestly I feel very called out about that bus thing
get ready to continue to feel that feeling during this comic!
Panels 2 and 3 is the biggest fucking mood when talking to adults. X"DDD You could white out the speech bubble and replace it with so many different things and it'd still be wildly accurate! XD
her mom is well intentioned! but she doesn't know what she's saying might cause a problem ;3
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Rubombee

Moth · the ace that stays up the sleeve
Artist
Writer
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
61
Caught
Jun 15, 2019
Messages
805
Location
Greenpath, Hallownest
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
they/them, shey/ther
Pokémon Type
  1. Water
  2. Bug
  3. Ghost
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't even eat baguette, are you sure they're French
that face at the beginning is so good, you make so many great potential reaction images

...is
is she gonna jump on a running rapidash though
 

Pika

rͬͬͬaͣͣͣtͭͭͭ
Artist
Screenshotter
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
27
Caught
Jun 9, 2019
Messages
162
Location
All around you, in the radio waves
Nature
Jolly
Pronouns
i'm pro but not noun
Pokémon Type
  1. Dark
  2. Fairy
Pokédex Entry
A Pokémon known for its harsh gaze and sharp tongue. Despite its rough exterior, it is friendlier than it looks.
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #9
that face at the beginning is so good, you make so many great potential reaction images

...is
is she gonna jump on a running rapidash though
i'm having so much fun with her faces, i hope to keep pushing them more
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IT IS TIME FOR, MAKE GOOD DECISIONS TIME
 

Rubombee

Moth · the ace that stays up the sleeve
Artist
Writer
Team Alpha
Pokédex No.
61
Caught
Jun 15, 2019
Messages
805
Location
Greenpath, Hallownest
Nature
Quiet
Pronouns
they/them, shey/ther
Pokémon Type
  1. Water
  2. Bug
  3. Ghost
Pokédex Entry
Doesn't even eat baguette, are you sure they're French
she's gonna do it, isn't she
*sigh* OF COURSE SHE IS
 

Snow Peregrine 0

Sinnohoan Talonflame (Talonfrost? Talonfreeze?)
Pokédex No.
917
Caught
Oct 19, 2019
Messages
74
Location
Deep beneath the cover of another perfect wonder
Nature
Bashful
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
  1. Flying
  2. Ice
Pokédex Entry
An ice-type subspecies of Talonflame that is found in Sinnoh. It is socially awkward as all hell.
I already love this holy crap

Is the entire comic just gonna be Lily making poor choices because that'd be fine

But what's a Rapidash doing in the city?
 

Pika

rͬͬͬaͣͣͣtͭͭͭ
Artist
Screenshotter
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
27
Caught
Jun 9, 2019
Messages
162
Location
All around you, in the radio waves
Nature
Jolly
Pronouns
i'm pro but not noun
Pokémon Type
  1. Dark
  2. Fairy
Pokédex Entry
A Pokémon known for its harsh gaze and sharp tongue. Despite its rough exterior, it is friendlier than it looks.
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #12
she's gonna do it, isn't she
*sigh* OF COURSE SHE IS
NO WRONGS, ONLY RIGHT
I already love this holy crap

Is the entire comic just gonna be Lily making poor choices because that'd be fine

But what's a Rapidash doing in the city?
oh ABSOLUTELY, it's her most major flaw
horse guy lives here! he is a law-abiding citizen and pays his horse taxes
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incredibly rude. unsubbed.
 

Snow Peregrine 0

Sinnohoan Talonflame (Talonfrost? Talonfreeze?)
Pokédex No.
917
Caught
Oct 19, 2019
Messages
74
Location
Deep beneath the cover of another perfect wonder
Nature
Bashful
Pronouns
She/Her
Pokémon Type
  1. Flying
  2. Ice
Pokédex Entry
An ice-type subspecies of Talonflame that is found in Sinnoh. It is socially awkward as all hell.
As rash as Lily is, I gotta say that's impressive.

...they're gonna get in an accident or something, aren't they?
 

Mopruk

Measure twice, cut once.
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
112
Caught
Jun 19, 2019
Messages
82
Location
Death's Door
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
He/Him
Pokémon Type
  1. ???
Pokédex Entry
1 ATK and 1 DEF. The weakest Pokemon, can only deal 1 damage.
It’s gonna take a lot of apples to make them forgive her.
 

Kadew

avatar by Pcaara
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
1,785
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
  1. Grass
  2. Normal
Pokédex Entry
If you encounter a wild Kadew, best practice is to gently bully her into remembering that she loves to draw. She forgets, sometimes.
Good lordy that girl has all the guts and none brains to jump onto a horse at full gallop. I can't wait to see the way this terrible horrible plan plays out from here.
 

Pika

rͬͬͬaͣͣͣtͭͭͭ
Artist
Screenshotter
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
27
Caught
Jun 9, 2019
Messages
162
Location
All around you, in the radio waves
Nature
Jolly
Pronouns
i'm pro but not noun
Pokémon Type
  1. Dark
  2. Fairy
Pokédex Entry
A Pokémon known for its harsh gaze and sharp tongue. Despite its rough exterior, it is friendlier than it looks.
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #16
uhh i forgot to upload last week's page here, so... double update!
As rash as Lily is, I gotta say that's impressive.

...they're gonna get in an accident or something, aren't they?
the only accident here is Lily's driving waaaaa (rimshot)
It’s gonna take a lot of apples to make them forgive her.
taking her to court and suing her for all the apples she's got
Good lordy that girl has all the guts and none brains to jump onto a horse at full gallop. I can't wait to see the way this terrible horrible plan plays out from here.
none brains with left guts and all Lily Stone. every plan is a good plan until it suddenly isn't!
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if you're stuck in traffic, try this
 

Mopruk

Measure twice, cut once.
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
112
Caught
Jun 19, 2019
Messages
82
Location
Death's Door
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
He/Him
Pokémon Type
  1. ???
Pokédex Entry
1 ATK and 1 DEF. The weakest Pokemon, can only deal 1 damage.
Now the rapidash is just showing off.
 

Kadew

avatar by Pcaara
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
1,785
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
  1. Grass
  2. Normal
Pokédex Entry
If you encounter a wild Kadew, best practice is to gently bully her into remembering that she loves to draw. She forgets, sometimes.
They're not called *rapid*-ash for nothing. Zoom fast over the pedestrians, hope no one can chase them down for a traffic violation.
 

Pika

rͬͬͬaͣͣͣtͭͭͭ
Artist
Screenshotter
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
27
Caught
Jun 9, 2019
Messages
162
Location
All around you, in the radio waves
Nature
Jolly
Pronouns
i'm pro but not noun
Pokémon Type
  1. Dark
  2. Fairy
Pokédex Entry
A Pokémon known for its harsh gaze and sharp tongue. Despite its rough exterior, it is friendlier than it looks.
  • Thread Starter Thread Starter
  • #19
Now the rapidash is just showing off.
either show off or get into a five-person pile up
They're not called *rapid*-ash for nothing. Zoom fast over the pedestrians, hope no one can chase them down for a traffic violation.
if you ride a horse thru traffic in real life, the same thing will happen! the police can't catch you
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consequences!
 

Kadew

avatar by Pcaara
🌱Featurer
Artist
Team Delta
Pokédex No.
38
Caught
Jun 10, 2019
Messages
1,785
Location
A Dry Place
Nature
Careful
Pronouns
Pokémon Type
  1. Grass
  2. Normal
Pokédex Entry
If you encounter a wild Kadew, best practice is to gently bully her into remembering that she loves to draw. She forgets, sometimes.
Oh no! Consequences!

True fact, my first thoughts upon seeing this page was to get hung up on the third panel thinking "The sun should be waaaay higher up by 9am in late spring, should be practically daylight by then. Those lovely pinkblues are long gone by even 7:30 and it's only februrarymarch."

But, I love that pinky orangeblue time of morning so much, I can't really fault you for wanting to depict it lol
 

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